Peter Saint-Andre wrote:
Bernd Fondermann wrote:
Two smaller nitpickings for section 1. ...
"with the negotiation being completed XMPP" - for my
english-as-a-foreign-language ears a word or two seems to be missing
after 'completed'. maybe "over", "using" or "inside"?
"but building in support for these features" - I am very unsure about
'building in'. it sounds strange to me in this context, "built-in"
sounded better.
Clarified (I hope):
http://svn.xmpp.org:18080/browse/XMPP/trunk/extensions/xep-0166.xml?r1=1420&r2=1426
+1
thanks,
Bernd
