Peter Saint-Andre wrote: > Joe Hildebrand wrote: > >> Other than these nits, I'm +1. > > Great. I'm going to read it over again here, too.
I've completed another copy edit and review. The only substantive change I made was to add a special service discovery feature for the caps server optimization feature, since I think otherwise there could be confusion between server support for caps (e.g., as advertised in the stream feature or provided in server presence if we ever define such a thing) and server support for the caps optimization as described in Section 7. I also put the "determining support" information in a separate section and I cleaned up a few phrases and examples. The SVN diff is here: http://svn.xmpp.org:18080/browse/XMPP/trunk/extensions/xep-0115.xml?r1=1477&r2=1479 Version 1.5pre12 is here: http://www.xmpp.org/extensions/tmp/xep-0115-1.5.html Peter -- Peter Saint-Andre https://stpeter.im/
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