David E. Ross wrote:
I find that I am often describing sniffing and spoofing in this
newsgroup. I decided to create a Web page that contains much of what I
previously said here.
I'm not quite satisfied with the phrasing. However, before I polish the
page, I thought I might solict input in case I've omitted something or
am giving incorrect information. Please review my draft at
<http://www.rossde.com/internet/sniffing.html> and let me know in this
thread if you find anything that should be changed, deleted, or added.
David, a small nit-pick.
One of the sub-paras is "If you are using a Gecko-based browser: "
It is possible that some readers might think "How would I know?" and
skip that paragraph.
Might be better if it were
"If you are using a Gecko-based browser like SeaMonkey, Fennec, Camino
(or other non-Firefox, Gecko-based browsers):
like you mention in the second sub-sub-para. Just get it out front.
Also, in the third sub-sub-para, you suggest reporting it to the
appropriate news.mozilla.org newsgroup. Some might not know about news
servers, but most everyone knows about Google and Google-groups, so
include a link to the m.o.seamonkey group there would be better.
Minor nit-picks. Keep up the good work.
Daniel
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