Tom,
> I can define two layers in the ABNF (one that generates MSG and one that
> generates SYSLOG-MSG) but SYSLOG-MSG is not ready to go on the wire so a third
> layer is needed, ie a transport, which is worth a mention in -protocol even if
> it is not defined there.  
I agree.
> So two layers in the ABNF, two in -protocol, three in
> the syslog stack as a whole.  Transport matters - the point of this work it to
> provide security and it is the (TLS) transport that gives us that; whether you
> see that as part of operations and management is a point of view.
I agree that it is a point of view. I do not see the necessity of
the two layers for MSG and SYSLOG-MSG as a part of operations and
management.
The reason being that it will generally be the same entity
("application", "module" call it whatever) that will generate MSG and
SYSLOG-MSG.
> 
> Tom Petch

Glenn
> 
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Glenn M. Keeni" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> To: "tom.petch" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> Cc: "Chris Lonvick" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>; <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> Sent: Saturday, June 23, 2007 2:44 AM
> Subject: Re: [Syslog] draft-ietf-syslog-protocol-21.txt: section 3 containsnew
> text to address ietf last call comments (fwd)
> 
> 
>> Tom,
>>    I do understand the line of reasoning. But I do not agree with the
>> conclusion. I agree that if we follow the ABNF we can have layers.
>> [It does not limit us to three layers]. But a reality check says that
>> we can have at most 2 significant layers. Significant from the point
>> of view of operations and management. Facilities will just generate
>> SYSLOG-MSG.
>>    Given that we have three layers it will be useful to have a reality
>> check by mapping these layers to entities that we have defined or know
>> about. I am afraid we keep going round in loops  because of the lack of
>> precise definitions. Without these definitions it is very difficult
>> to tell who is going wrong where. The terms and entities we know
>> understand in this context are "Facility" , "Transport". Who generates
>> the MSG? Is that a new entity that we are defining? What real world
>> entity does it map to ? Why are we interested in its operations ?
>> The answer to the last question will determine the significance of the
>> entity and the corresponding "layer".
>>    I am sorry if the above sounds like a digression, but I have a real
>> problem in mapping onto reality without answers to the above.
>>> I think that the existing, already agreeed text in protocol-21 does give us
> a
>>> three way split in the stack.   Looking at the ABNF, there is MSG which is
>>> prepended by additional fields to form SYSLOG-MSG which will in turn be
>>> prepended before the PDU is placed on the wire.  So I can see a top layer
>>> generating and interpreting MSG, a middle layer turning that into SYSLOG-MSG
> and
>>> a lower layer providing the UDP/TLS/etc headers/trailers.
>>>
>>> In turn, this can drive statistics and error counters, so that a single MSG
>>> which is sent with two different facility codes each over three transports
> would
>>> count  as 1 in the upper layer, 2 in the middle and 6 in the lower.  Or an
>>> invalid facility would increment an error counter in the middle layer.
>>>
>>> I am not saying this is the only split or the best split and I am certainly
> not
>>> saying any implementation has to make any of this layering apparent in its
> code
>>> structure; but I do think that a three-way split is sensible.
>> I will not argue. But, I will repeat, who sends the MSG, to whom ?
>> Facilty to X ? X to Facility ? Facility to Facility ? If it one of the
>> first two cases then, what is "X" ?
>>> But, as I have said before, I also see an inconsistency in the definitions
> added
>>> to protocol-21, one that I would like to see resolved..
>> I fully agree.
>>> Tom Petch
>> Glenn
>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>> From: "Glenn M. Keeni" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
>>> To: "Chris Lonvick" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
>>> Cc: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
>>> Sent: Wednesday, June 20, 2007 3:56 PM
>>> Subject: Re: [Syslog] draft-ietf-syslog-protocol-21.txt: section 3
> containsnew
>>> text to address ietf last call comments (fwd)
>>>
>>>
>>>> Hi,
>>>>   My comments follow.
>>>>
>>>> Glenn
>>>>
>>>> +------------------------------------------------------------+
>>>>
>>>> 1. Page 4.
>>>>    "syslog content" is the management information contained
>>>>     in a syslog message.
>>>>    a. Are we sure about this "management information"?
>>>>       It seems to be a restriction on the scope of the
>>>>       information that can be carried in a syslog message.
>>>>       I suggest that we drop the term "management". It
>>>>       does not add any value but raises several questions.
>>>>    b. What is the difference in a "syslog content" and
>>>>       "syslog message"
>>>>       Do we need a distinction?
>>>>
>>>> 2. The "syslog application" layer handles generation,
>>>>    interpretation, routing and storage of syslog messages.
>>>>     "handles generation" is confusing. Then the
>>>>      syslog message will first appear at this layer.
>>>>      But it appears before ( on top of) this layer
>>>>      More about this in (c)
>>>>
>>>> 3. I do not agree with the first layer "content" .
>>>>    On page-5 the "functions" of the layers are given, the
>>>>    functions of the "content" layer are not given.
>>>>    It is not clear what abstraction is intended in a layer.
>>>>    But whatever that is - layer-1 (syslog content) and
>>>>    layer-2(syslog application) do not belong to the same
>>>>    genre. Layer-1 does not belong there.
>>>>
>>>> 4. On page-6
>>>>    The boxes represent syslog-enabled applications.
>>>>    a. Is a syslog-enabled application not a syslog
>>>>       application ?
>>>>       The boxes in Diagram-2 are labelled "collector" ,
>>>>       "originator" which are syslog applications.
>>>>
>>>> [The following comments are not related to recent changes
>>>>  in the document. But, they are relevant and will need to be
>>>>  addressed some time. ]
>>>>
>>>> 5. If, syslog-mib-tc is being published then we probably do
>>>>    not need to have the paragraphs other than the first one in
>>>>    section 6.2.1
>>>>
>>>> 6. 6.2.5 APP-NAME
>>>>    The APP-NAME field SHOULD identify the device or application
>>>>    that originated the message.
>>>>
>>>>    We need to explain "device" or drop the term. Is a host a
>>>>    device?
>>>>
>>>> +----------------------------------------------------------+
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Chris Lonvick wrote:
>>>>> Hi Folks,
>>>>>
>>>>> This note from Sam to [EMAIL PROTECTED] for those of you who don't 
>>>>> subscribe.
>>>>>
>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>> Chris
>>>>>
>>>>> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
>>>>> Date: Fri, 15 Jun 2007 19:48:25 -0400 (EDT)
>>>>> From: Sam Hartman <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
>>>>> To: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
>>>>> Cc: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
>>>>> Subject: [Syslog] draft-ietf-syslog-protocol-21.txt: section 3 contains
>>>>> new text
>>>>>      to address ietf last call comments
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> I'd like to draw the attention of the community to section 3 of
>>>>> draft-ietf-syslog-protocol-21.txt.  This text contains text and a
>>>>> clarified model of the various layers in the syslog architecture and
>>>>> new terminology for the parties.
>>>>>
>>>>> I believe this is responsive to the ietf last call comments and I
>>>>> believe the changes have been discussed sufficiently in the WG.
>>>>>
>>>>> I am not asking for a new last call but I do want to make people aware
>>>>> of the text.  If people believe a new last call is necessary please
>>>>> let me know now.  Currently the document is scheduled on the Thursday,
>>>>> June 21 telechat.
>>>>>
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