El 17/06/11 18:15, [email protected] escribió: > > Hi, > > The walkthrough, originally imported from Incognito, is out of sync with > Tails for a long time. Some progress have been made to solve that issue: > > - in master branch: the out-of-sync parts have been clearly marked as > outdated. This is already available online on Tails website; > > - in doc-rework branch: the walkthrough have been splitted into > different pages which are partially merged with the rest of Tails > documentation. Some of these pages have already been reviewed > according to current Tails status. > > This is still a work-in-progress, but a first review is already welcome, > as well as contributions if you're inclined. > > Cheers,
Hi, Thank you for doing that. It's a nice bootstrap for the work to be done on the doc. I just had a look at the first section « About Tails ». As you already mentioned, at the moment in it there is basically: - Parts that could be merged into /doc/warning. - Other bits that are already addressed by /about. Plus, this secion is called « About Tails » almost like the page called « About » which is a bit confusing. - The first part of the /doc/about/anonymity page which I don't like that much. If people reading the doc up to this point still need to know « why they need anonymity » we should rather point them to torproject.org. - A similar thing goes for the main /doc/introduction. It sounds like the usual blabla to my ears and something that's not really worth reading. So do we agree on rescuing what needs to be rescued into the /about and /doc/warning pages and getting rid of all the rest? It'll remain until the end of time in the git history of course in case we feel nostalgic at some point ;) -- sajolida
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