Hi, [email protected] wrote (23 Jul 2011 21:49:34 GMT) : >> From: sajolida <[email protected]> >> Date: Fri, 8 Jul 2011 06:11:17 -0700 >> > I had a look to your changes. Here are some comments
> About commit 09d89fd: I think that it was nice that the beginning of the > about page was a short summary of the goal of Tails: > Tails is a live CD or live USB that aims at preserving your privacy > and anonymity. It helps you to: > - use the Internet anonymously almost anywhere you go and on any computer: > all connections to the Internet are forced to go through the Tor > network; > - leave no trace on the computer you're using unless you ask it > explicitly. > [...] > I'm not convinced that it is better with the new first paragraph: > Tails is a live system: a complete operating-system designed to be > used from a CD or a USB stick independently of the computer's > original operating system. > > [...] > I think that it is better to start to summary the goal of Tails in a few > words that to explain what is a live system, which is already done lower > in the page in the "Use anywhere but leave no trace" section. Agreed (slightly, and I lack the big picture). > So I suggest to reword this first paragraph to something like: > Tails is a live system that aims at preserving your privacy and > anonymity. It helps you to use the Internet anonymously almost > anywhere you go and on any computer but leave no trace. I'm not comfortable with leaving "unless you ask it explicitly" aside. Cheers, -- intrigeri <[email protected]> | GnuPG key @ https://gaffer.ptitcanardnoir.org/intrigeri/intrigeri.asc | OTR fingerprint @ https://gaffer.ptitcanardnoir.org/intrigeri/otr.asc | If you must label the absolute, use it's proper name: Temporary. _______________________________________________ tails-dev mailing list [email protected] https://mailman.boum.org/listinfo/tails-dev
