> From: sajolida <[email protected]> > Date: Mon, 4 Jul 2011 07:28:31 -0700
[...] > Hi, > > Thank you for doing that. It's a nice bootstrap for the work to be done > on the doc. > Happy if it helps. > I just had a look at the first section « About Tails ». As you already > mentioned, at the moment in it there is basically: > - Parts that could be merged into /doc/warning. > - Other bits that are already addressed by /about. Plus, this secion is > called « About Tails » almost like the page called « About » which is a > bit confusing. Yes, but these page are to precise what is Tails about. They are like subpages of /about. Perhaps this section could have a better name, through. > - The first part of the /doc/about/anonymity page which I don't like > that much. If people reading the doc up to this point still need to know > « why they need anonymity » we should rather point them to torproject.org. I agree it is probably not the right place to speak about that, but I though that we might want to take inspiration from this to put some words on that somewhere else on the website. But I don't mind if it disappears. > - A similar thing goes for the main /doc/introduction. It sounds like > the usual blabla to my ears and something that's not really worth reading. > I would like to have this /doc section a real Tails documentation, and for me (some bits of) this intro are important to have at the beginning of such a document, so I'd rather be in favor of keeping it and improving it. > So do we agree on rescuing what needs to be rescued into the /about and > /doc/warning pages and getting rid of all the rest? It'll remain until > the end of time in the git history of course in case we feel nostalgic > at some point ;) > Basically I agree on that plan. Some comments on details, through: - there is the /doc/about/requirements page that should be handeled. It might be good to let it in the about section or to put somewhere it in the section about getting and installing Tails; - once merged I see this about section as a part of the doc, which could mean to move it to /doc/about. Cheers, Alan --
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