On Thu, Nov 11, 2021 at 08:01:37PM +0000, Klemens Nanni wrote: > On Thu, Nov 11, 2021 at 05:48:24PM +0000, Stuart Henderson wrote: > > On 2021/11/11 16:30, Klemens Nanni wrote: > > > On Thu, Nov 11, 2021 at 04:11:10PM +0000, Raf Czlonka wrote: > > > > Hello, > > > > > > > > It seems like this has been missed in recent thread[0]. > > > > > > > > Not entirely sure whether the sentence "flows" any longer but here > > > > it goes anyway. > > > > > > > > [0] https://marc.info/?l=openbsd-tech&m=163507448118443&w=2 > > > > > > Thanks, I missed that! > > > > > > > Index: share/man/man5/hostname.if.5 > > > > =================================================================== > > > > RCS file: /cvs/src/share/man/man5/hostname.if.5,v > > > > retrieving revision 1.77 > > > > diff -u -p -r1.77 hostname.if.5 > > > > --- share/man/man5/hostname.if.5 17 Jul 2021 15:28:31 -0000 > > > > 1.77 > > > > +++ share/man/man5/hostname.if.5 11 Nov 2021 16:09:33 -0000 > > > > @@ -67,13 +67,13 @@ inet 10.0.0.1 255.255.255.0 10.0.0.255 d > > > > Each line is processed separately and in order. > > > > For example: > > > > .Bd -literal -offset indent > > > > -nwid mynwid wpakey mywpakey > > > > +join mynwid wpakey mywpakey > > > > inet6 autoconf > > > > inet autoconf > > > > .Ed > > > > .Pp > > > > would run ifconfig three times to set the > > > > -.Cm nwid > > > > +.Cm join > > > > and > > > > .Cm wpakey > > > > of the interface, > > > > > > Maybe this reads better in general? > > > > > > would run ifconfig three times to join a wireless network using WPA > > > and > > > to set the AUTOCONF6 and AUTOCONF4 flags, respectively. > > > > It is more "add a network to the join list", join implies that it's > > connecting directly to that ssid (i.e. what "nwid" did). > > Good point. > Also no markup as per jmc. > > OK? > > > Index: hostname.if.5 > =================================================================== > RCS file: /cvs/src/share/man/man5/hostname.if.5,v > retrieving revision 1.77 > diff -u -p -r1.77 hostname.if.5 > --- hostname.if.5 17 Jul 2021 15:28:31 -0000 1.77 > +++ hostname.if.5 11 Nov 2021 20:00:45 -0000 > @@ -67,21 +67,13 @@ inet 10.0.0.1 255.255.255.0 10.0.0.255 d > Each line is processed separately and in order. > For example: > .Bd -literal -offset indent > -nwid mynwid wpakey mywpakey > +join mynwid wpakey mywpakey > inet6 autoconf > inet autoconf > .Ed > .Pp > -would run ifconfig three times to set the > -.Cm nwid > -and > -.Cm wpakey > -of the interface, > -the > -.Sy AUTOCONF6 > -flag and the > -.Sy AUTOCONF4 > -flag, respectively. > +would run ifconfig three times to add a wireless network using WPA to the > +join list and enable dynamic address configuration, respectively. > .Sh STATIC ADDRESS CONFIGURATION > The following packed formats are valid for configuring network > interfaces with static addresses. >
i don;t think this bit of text works well now because you say it runs ifconfig 3 times then ... respectively. but you only list two things (even though i understand dynamic config is two). since your text is already clear, i'd omit ", respectively". or maybe say "inet4 and inet6 dynamic ..." to balance out the three times would be better. jmc
