On Thu, Nov 11, 2021 at 08:13:13PM +0000, Jason McIntyre wrote:
> i don;t think this bit of text works well now because you say it runs
> ifconfig 3 times then ... respectively. but you only list two things
> (even though i understand dynamic config is two). since your text is
> already clear, i'd omit ", respectively". or maybe say "inet4 and inet6
> dynamic ..." to balance out the three times would be better.

Thanks, is this better?


Index: hostname.if.5
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RCS file: /cvs/src/share/man/man5/hostname.if.5,v
retrieving revision 1.77
diff -u -p -r1.77 hostname.if.5
--- hostname.if.5       17 Jul 2021 15:28:31 -0000      1.77
+++ hostname.if.5       11 Nov 2021 20:30:05 -0000
@@ -67,21 +67,13 @@ inet 10.0.0.1 255.255.255.0 10.0.0.255 d
 Each line is processed separately and in order.
 For example:
 .Bd -literal -offset indent
-nwid mynwid wpakey mywpakey
+join mynwid wpakey mywpakey
 inet6 autoconf
 inet autoconf
 .Ed
 .Pp
-would run ifconfig three times to set the
-.Cm nwid
-and
-.Cm wpakey
-of the interface,
-the
-.Sy AUTOCONF6
-flag and the
-.Sy AUTOCONF4
-flag, respectively.
+would run ifconfig three times to add a wireless network using WPA to the
+join list and enable dynamic address configuration for IPv6 and IPv4.
 .Sh STATIC ADDRESS CONFIGURATION
 The following packed formats are valid for configuring network
 interfaces with static addresses.

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