On Thu, Nov 11, 2021 at 08:30:45PM +0000, Klemens Nanni wrote:
> On Thu, Nov 11, 2021 at 08:13:13PM +0000, Jason McIntyre wrote:
> > i don;t think this bit of text works well now because you say it runs
> > ifconfig 3 times then ... respectively. but you only list two things
> > (even though i understand dynamic config is two). since your text is
> > already clear, i'd omit ", respectively". or maybe say "inet4 and inet6
> > dynamic ..." to balance out the three times would be better.
> 
> Thanks, is this better?
> 
> 
> Index: hostname.if.5
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /cvs/src/share/man/man5/hostname.if.5,v
> retrieving revision 1.77
> diff -u -p -r1.77 hostname.if.5
> --- hostname.if.5     17 Jul 2021 15:28:31 -0000      1.77
> +++ hostname.if.5     11 Nov 2021 20:30:05 -0000
> @@ -67,21 +67,13 @@ inet 10.0.0.1 255.255.255.0 10.0.0.255 d
>  Each line is processed separately and in order.
>  For example:
>  .Bd -literal -offset indent
> -nwid mynwid wpakey mywpakey
> +join mynwid wpakey mywpakey
>  inet6 autoconf
>  inet autoconf
>  .Ed
>  .Pp
> -would run ifconfig three times to set the
> -.Cm nwid
> -and
> -.Cm wpakey
> -of the interface,
> -the
> -.Sy AUTOCONF6
> -flag and the
> -.Sy AUTOCONF4
> -flag, respectively.
> +would run ifconfig three times to add a wireless network using WPA to the
> +join list and enable dynamic address configuration for IPv6 and IPv4.
>  .Sh STATIC ADDRESS CONFIGURATION
>  The following packed formats are valid for configuring network
>  interfaces with static addresses.
> 

bingo!

jmc

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