Pat Bredenberg wrote: > Hi Rafael, > > This is excellent! Thank you very much for such a descriptive man > page. I've made just a couple of comments below for your consideration. > [snip]
Hi Pat Thanks for the comments/corrections, here's the revised version. I'm pretty new at writing man pages (and English is not my 1st language) so please feel free to correct me ;) I've included psrinfo(1M) and kstat(1M) on the 'see also' section. Not sure if its appropriate/correct to describe features of other commands here, but might be interesting. I think the documentation community has a system for reviewing man drafts, do you know anything about it ? thanks Rafael -------------- next part -------------- An embedded and charset-unspecified text was scrubbed... Name: powertop.man.txt URL: <http://mail.opensolaris.org/pipermail/tesla-dev/attachments/20080408/126ec224/attachment.txt>
