Hi David, thanks a lot for your effort for making this accessible for starters, great stuff!
I only strolled halfways through your tutorial and have a few remarks: A) Why did you duplicate existing buttons with different (also existing, but coloured) icons? [image: Bildschirmfoto 2020-05-03 um 12.19.33.png] Screenshot from the Tools sidebar. Apart from the stopwatch icon (that I contributed for the timestamp functionality of TW), there is no clue why a user should use one or the other. Let the community know if you lack icons, maybe there are people willing to help. B) Folded tiddlers still show the links section, is this by design? Using Highlights in Context that still needs a lot of space. C) Wording on the eye tab: The word *references* is alredy in the title, so I think you could omit "Refs" and "Refs as" and optimise readability by NOT using all caps. D) Two Columns intro, step 4: As a non native English reader I find it hard to understand sentences like "Click the [ | ] icon in the sidebar page controls multiple times to toggle between one and two columns." Maybe this could be shorter? "Click the [ | ] icon in the sidebar to toggle between one and two columns." (Doesn’t the word "toggle" imply you can switch and switch back using the same button?) I will have a break now. All the best, Thomas -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "TiddlyWiki" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to tiddlywiki+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com. To view this discussion on the web visit https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/tiddlywiki/a7d2ae6e-0882-46f6-83a6-9589f0bf895c%40googlegroups.com.
