On 16 March 2008 Joan Warmbold wrote with reference to her mistake about
footnotes (endnotes) in *The Nature Assumption*:
> I apologize for all of you fans of Harris's work for my
> inaccurate contentions about her book.

Re the phrase "all you fans of Harris's work", I'm sure Joan will agree
that this is not a matter of whether one agrees or disagrees with Harris's
thesis, but of factual accuracy. I quite frequently find myself fuming at
misstatements about, or the misrepresentation of, a person's argument by a
critic even when I am generally in agreement with the viewpoint of the
critic.
 
This also happens to be relevant (in two different ways) to the following
statement by Joan:
> But both Pinker and Harris boldly state that parents are not important.
> Quote from the foreword by Pinker states, "The thesis of The Nurture 
> Assumption . . .(is) that genes and peers matter, but parent's don't
matter. 
> In the preface by Harris, she quotes from her journal article, "Do
parents
> have any important long-term effects on the development of their
children's
> personality? This article examines the evidence and concludes that the
> answer is no."

First: In relation to Harris, her contention is that parents do not have
any "long term effects on the development of their child's personality".
Compare this with Joan's assertion in the first sentence quoted above that
Harris has "boldly" stated that "parents are not important". (That Joan
then quotes accurately what Harris actually contends does not alter the
erroneousness of that first sentence in relation to Harris.)

Second: In relation to Pinker, regardless of the accuracy or otherwise of
Joan's first sentence above, I don't think she should have used ellipses in
the sentence of his that she quotes, because the reader has no idea if the
omitted words provide more precise information in regard to what
characteristics of children "parents don't matter". (I have not
infrequently seen the meaning of a quoted passage radically altered by the
replacement of a phrase by ellipses.) Sometimes this doesn't matter, as the
ellipses relate to words not relevant to the point at issue, but here the
structure of the sentence is such that they quite possibly could be
relevant.

In this instance the omitted words are so imprecise that including them
doesn't help: Pinker writes "that in the formation of an adult" genes
matter and peers matter, but parents don't matter. What Pinker means by "in
the formation of an adult" is anyone's guess. But this takes me back to my
very first point above. A second person's statement of someone else's
thesis (including, as in this instance, when the second person is a
supporter of the thesis), is not necessarily accurate. So the sole issue
here should be: Does Harris contend that "parents are not important"? The
answer to this is, contrary to what Joan implies above, is "no".

Allen Esterson
Former lecturer, Science Department
Southwark College, London
http://www.esterson.org

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