Claudia and Carol (and Stephen and Chris and Michael . . . )
:)
Claudia, I think you make a good point that the phrase could have been written 
differently- but given the number of possible sources for this material, all 
phrasing it slightly differently, I would not be surprised if several of them 
read remarkably like other quotations if you googled it or submitted it to one 
of the "checkers".  (Claudia, I do really like your exercise in rephrasing! 
Mind if I steal it- :) Seriously, I would like to point students to this if you 
don't mind.) I'm agreeing, I think, with Chris and Stephen or a combination of 
several posts- How does one state that in such a way that it doesn't read like 
a quotation from some other source. Carol, did you get this quote (the one that 
started this) from their textbook or something you assigned? If so, then I'd 
have a bigger problem with it. If it is from something they referenced, I don't 
know what my response would be exactly- it would depend on the student, the 
course, and a host of other things- But you did say this was an upper level 
course? If so, then I think I'd be a bit firmer about it. To be honest though, 
I think I'd err on the side of teaching- perhaps have them rewrite it (but I 
bet it is too late for that now!). Or lowering the grade with a warning about 
careful rephrasing. (BTW- this IS one reason I am deciding against assigning 
writing that is due at the very end of the term- I can't make them re-write 
it!!)
Tim
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Professor and Chair Department of Psychology
The College of Idaho
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teaching: intro to neuropsychology; psychopharmacology; general; history and 
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From: Claudia Stanny [mailto:[email protected]]
Sent: Sun 5/10/2009 1:40 PM
To: Teaching in the Psychological Sciences (TIPS)
Subject: RE: [tips] Reality check



How many different ways?

Hearing loss is frequently caused by damage to some or all of the
sensory receptors in the ear.

Usually hearing loss is caused by damage to or death of sensory hair
cells.

Most hearing impairment can be attributed to damaged hair cells in the
ear. In some cases, receptor cells are destroyed.

When hair cells stop functioning because of damage (broken hairs) or
because of cell death, hearing loss occurs.

I could go on . . . it isn't that hard if you understand the original
text.
The problem is that students frequently do not understand the original
so they have no clue how to write this differently and still communicate
the same information.

I have an exercise on paraphrasing on me faculty web page. One example
entails paraphrasing part of a method section of a paper. Challenging,
but not impossible.

http://uwf.edu/cstanny/website/WritingResources.htm

Miguel Roig has done some nice work on teaching students about
paraphrasing, too.


Claudia J. Stanny, Ph.D.                     
Director, Center for University Teaching, Learning, and Assessment

Associate Professor, Psychology
University of West Florida
Pensacola, FL  32514 - 5751

Phone:   (850) 857-6355 or  473-7435
e-mail:        [email protected]

|-----Original Message-----
|From: DeVolder Carol L [mailto:[email protected]]
|Sent: Sunday, May 10, 2009 2:07 PM
|To: Teaching in the Psychological Sciences (TIPS)
|Subject: RE: [tips] Reality check
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|What I'm finding is that, rather than explaining things in their own
|words, students are stringing together phrases lifted directly from
|articles. It makes me very angry that students think I'm dumb enough to
|know when they do or don't know what they are talking about. This is an
|upper-level course. I realize I asked for it by requiring a brief paper
|(5-7 pages, 3 refs from primary sources, etc.). It is my deeply-held
|belief that I should not lower my standards by having them do things
|that don't require writing. I have them write short papers throughout
|the course that involve critical thinking and reasoning, and are not
|APA-style activities, but I think they should be able to complete this
|brief assignment without plagiarizing.
|
|Carol L. DeVolder, Ph.D.
|Professor of Psychology
|Chair, Department of Psychology
|St. Ambrose University
|518 West Locust Street
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|-----Original Message-----
|From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]]
|Sent: Sun 5/10/2009 1:57 PM
|To: Teaching in the Psychological Sciences (TIPS)
|Subject: Re: [tips] Reality check
|
|I think it boils down to how many different ways can you paraphrase
that
|sentence? I suspect if it's a limited report without a larger context
|from which to paraphrase, that you might see a lot of similar sounding
|attempts at paraphrase.
|
|Annette
|
|Annette Kujawski Taylor, Ph.D.
|Professor of Psychology
|University of San Diego
|5998 Alcala Park
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|---- Original message ----
|>Date: Sun, 10 May 2009 13:17:19 -0500
|>From: "DeVolder Carol L" <[email protected]>
|>Subject: [tips] Reality check
|>To: "Teaching in the Psychological Sciences (TIPS)"
|<[email protected]>
|>
|>OK, I need a quick show of hands--plagiarism or not?
|>
|>Here is the sentence from the paper:
|>
|>   When hearing loss exists, the main cause is damage or complete
|destruction of sensory hair cells.
|>
|>
|>Here is the sentence from the article:
|>
|>   The principle cause of hearing loss is damage to or complete
|destruction of sensory hair cells.
|>
|>
|>I am encountering this so often, I'm starting to question my own
|judgment.
|>
|>
|>Thanks,
|>Carol
|>
|>
|>Carol L. DeVolder, Ph.D.
|>Professor of Psychology
|>Chair, Department of Psychology
|>St. Ambrose University
|>518 West Locust Street
|>Davenport, Iowa 52803
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