Jamie Nguyen wrote:
> Yes, it does seem a little out of place, but I don't think there is
> any harm done if we leave it there.

Domains in "Chapter 10" are deployed in serial and domains in "Appendix D" are
deployed in parallel. In other words, "Chapter 10" is the first picture in
chapter-10.html and "Appendix D" is the second picture in chapter-10.html .

Therefore, I though "Appendix D" can come to the right place if rewritten as
"Chapter 11".
But I also felt that "Appendix D" is easier to try than "Chapter 10" because
"Appendix D" explains complete steps while "Chapter 10" explains only concepts.
Maybe rewriting "Chapter 10" as "Appendix E" is better.

> Personally, I prefer to keep the distinction. By separating into
> "Core" group, we indicate to the newcomer that they can get away with
> only reading "Core". 7 chapters is less scary than 10 chapters, and it
> is better to make the learning curve appear as short and easy as
> possible.

OK. If you have no more changes, let's copy 2.3-tmp/ to 2.3/ .

> Also, I have started porting 1.8 docs to AKARI.

Thank you. Documentation for AKARI is very similar to that of TOMOYO 1.8.
What we need to do is to remove some few dozens of lines that explain

 capability
 ipc signal
 network inet dgram recv
 network unix dgram recv

and to add few dozens of lines that explain version&config dependency explained
at http://akari.sourceforge.jp/comparison.html . Appendix G-J applies to AKARI.

Guiding users to http://tomoyo.sourceforge.jp/1.8/chapter-4.html after
installation instructions might be possible if errata pages (like

  "capability" section explained at 
http://tomoyo.sourceforge.jp/1.8/policy-specification/domain-policy-syntax.html.ja#capability
 is not supported by AKARI.

  "ipc signal" section explained at 
http://tomoyo.sourceforge.jp/1.8/policy-specification/domain-policy-syntax.html.ja#ipc_signal
 is not supported by AKARI.

) are provided.

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