Benjamin Kaduk <[email protected]> wrote
Mon, 23 Mar 2015 10:43:14 -0400 (EDT):

| [fixed embarassing typo in the subject line]

Don't worry. It's not the first time that's happened. :)


| > | I seem to be missing a normative reference for various terminology and
| > | conventions (e.g., "the timestamp, as a number", which I assume is
| > | milliseconds since the epoch, excluding leap seconds, in decimal, to match
| > | the other specs).
| >
| > They are all from RFC6962. What'd be the right way of refer to it?
| > Mentioning 6962 in each and every entry, like
| >
| >          +  sct_version - Version as defined in [RFC6962] Section 3.2,
| >             as a number.
| >
| >          +  log_id - LogID as defined in [RFC6962] Section 3.2, as a
| >             base64 encoded string.
| >
| > or rather put some text at the top of the section (3.1.3. in this case)?
| 
| I would actually consider making a section 1.1 "Terminology", with
| something like "this document relies on terminology and data structures
| defined in RFC 6962, including but not limited to the SCT Version, LogID,
| SCT timestamp, CTExtensions, ...".  Of the two you list, I would prefer
| the former (mentioning 6962 in each line).

Addressed in b3c2525.


| > | The formatting in 4.1.3 seems funky; it looks like a list has been
| > | condensed into running text (including bullet symbols)
| >
| > Would capitalizing the first word of each point be sufficient or should
| > we get rid of the list altogether?
| 
| This list is okay, but I would just make it a semicolon-separated list.

7c9801f.

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