Hi Stig, https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel-03 has been uploaded with the comment resolutions below incorporated.
Thanks, Donald =============================== Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA [email protected] On Thu, May 26, 2016 at 12:23 AM, Donald Eastlake <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Stig, > > On Wed, May 25, 2016 at 3:26 PM, Alia Atlas <[email protected]> wrote: >> Stig, >> >> Thank you very much for your review. I'm also forwarding it to trill so >> that the WG can see it. >> >> Regards, >> Alia >> >> On Wed, May 25, 2016 at 2:28 PM, Stig Venaas <[email protected]> wrote: >>> >>> Hi >>> >>> Sorry for being a bit late with this review. At least the document is >>> well written and easy to understand. There are no significant issues. >>> >>> I am wondering about the security considerations though. Are there >>> really no differences between the multi-level alternatives when it >>> comes to security? > > Well, I guess a couple sentences could be added that the choice of > using aggregated nicknames, and the resulting possible duplication of > nicknames between areas, increases the possibility of a TRILL Data > packet being delivered to the wrong egress RBridge if areas are > suddenly merged. However, is many cases the data would be discarded at > that egress because it would not match a known end station data label > / MAC address. > >>> I have two tiny editorial comments. >>> >>> Section 1.4 typo >>> RBridge - Routing Bridge, an alterntive name for a TRILL switch >>> ^^^^^^^^^ > > OK, > >>> Also, several places it says "non-zero" which is correct, but there >>> are some instances of "nonzero". > > Apparently both of those are correct but I agree the draft should use > one of them consistently. I'll replace the two instances of nonzero > with the hyphenated form. > > Thanks, > Donald > =============================== > Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) > 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA > [email protected] > >>> Stig >>> >>> >>> On Wed, May 4, 2016 at 11:52 PM, Jonathan Hardwick >>> <[email protected]> wrote: >>> > Hi Stig >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > Please would you do a routing directorate QA review of >>> > draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel? >>> > >>> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel/ >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > Note that this is a “QA review.” The document is still being worked on >>> > by >>> > the TRILL working group. The goal of this review is to provide a >>> > different >>> > perspective on the work and to improve its quality. Hence, your comments >>> > will be provided primarily for the benefit of the TRILL chairs and the >>> > document authors. >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > Please could you provide your comments by May 20 and copy your comments >>> > to >>> > the rtg-dir list? >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > The following web page contains a briefing on the QA process, and >>> > guidance >>> > for the QA reviewer. >>> > >>> > https://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDirDocQa >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > Please let me know whether you can do it, or not. >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > Many thanks >>> > >>> > Jon >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> trill mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/trill >> _______________________________________________ trill mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/trill
