Hi The new version looks good to me. It addresses my comments and I see the draft has been improved further with additional changes.
Stig On Tue, Aug 2, 2016 at 7:02 PM, Donald Eastlake <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Stig, > > As below, could you look at this draft to see if your comments have been > resolved? > > Thanks, > Donald > =============================== > Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) > 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA > [email protected] > > On Sat, Jun 4, 2016 at 6:36 PM, Donald Eastlake <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> Hi Stig, >> >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel-03 has >> been uploaded with the comment resolutions below incorporated. >> >> Thanks, >> Donald >> =============================== >> Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) >> 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA >> [email protected] >> >> >> On Thu, May 26, 2016 at 12:23 AM, Donald Eastlake <[email protected]> >> wrote: >> > Hi Stig, >> > >> > On Wed, May 25, 2016 at 3:26 PM, Alia Atlas <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> Stig, >> >> >> >> Thank you very much for your review. I'm also forwarding it to trill >> >> so >> >> that the WG can see it. >> >> >> >> Regards, >> >> Alia >> >> >> >> On Wed, May 25, 2016 at 2:28 PM, Stig Venaas <[email protected]> wrote: >> >>> >> >>> Hi >> >>> >> >>> Sorry for being a bit late with this review. At least the document is >> >>> well written and easy to understand. There are no significant issues. >> >>> >> >>> I am wondering about the security considerations though. Are there >> >>> really no differences between the multi-level alternatives when it >> >>> comes to security? >> > >> > Well, I guess a couple sentences could be added that the choice of >> > using aggregated nicknames, and the resulting possible duplication of >> > nicknames between areas, increases the possibility of a TRILL Data >> > packet being delivered to the wrong egress RBridge if areas are >> > suddenly merged. However, is many cases the data would be discarded at >> > that egress because it would not match a known end station data label >> > / MAC address. >> > >> >>> I have two tiny editorial comments. >> >>> >> >>> Section 1.4 typo >> >>> RBridge - Routing Bridge, an alterntive name for a TRILL switch >> >>> ^^^^^^^^^ >> > >> > OK, >> > >> >>> Also, several places it says "non-zero" which is correct, but there >> >>> are some instances of "nonzero". >> > >> > Apparently both of those are correct but I agree the draft should use >> > one of them consistently. I'll replace the two instances of nonzero >> > with the hyphenated form. >> > >> > Thanks, >> > Donald >> > =============================== >> > Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) >> > 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA >> > [email protected] >> > >> >>> Stig >> >>> >> >>> >> >>> On Wed, May 4, 2016 at 11:52 PM, Jonathan Hardwick >> >>> <[email protected]> wrote: >> >>> > Hi Stig >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > Please would you do a routing directorate QA review of >> >>> > draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel? >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel/ >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > Note that this is a “QA review.” The document is still being worked >> >>> > on >> >>> > by >> >>> > the TRILL working group. The goal of this review is to provide a >> >>> > different >> >>> > perspective on the work and to improve its quality. Hence, your >> >>> > comments >> >>> > will be provided primarily for the benefit of the TRILL chairs and >> >>> > the >> >>> > document authors. >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > Please could you provide your comments by May 20 and copy your >> >>> > comments >> >>> > to >> >>> > the rtg-dir list? >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > The following web page contains a briefing on the QA process, and >> >>> > guidance >> >>> > for the QA reviewer. >> >>> > >> >>> > https://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDirDocQa >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > Please let me know whether you can do it, or not. >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > Many thanks >> >>> > >> >>> > Jon >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> >> >> >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> >> trill mailing list >> >> [email protected] >> >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/trill >> >> > > _______________________________________________ trill mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/trill
