On Sat, 2010-03-13 at 21:30 +0100, Thorsten Wilms wrote: > Hi! > > I decided to show the next round of the Ubuntu Manual title page design > to a wider audience, so please have a look at: > http://thorwil.wordpress.com/2010/03/13/ubuntu-manual-title-page/
Nice designs. I can't tell the difference between a and b but I like them: they are simple and clean and the circle of friends pattern at the bottom says "Ubuntu" to me. c is a bit top heavy, with this big blob of colour on top and a large empty space below. d is OK but the white text on light orange background at the bottom is difficult to read. f, g and h feel a bit boring: even though the design is shifted to the right, all elements in the block are centred; and the dots don't have any obvious meaning, apart from filling empty space (and possibly making you feel that it's a big heavy manual that you don't want to read). Generally speaking, I prefer the flush left design of a and b to the centred design of the others. I also feel that in c, d, e and f, the logo is a little too large compared to the rest of the design. But all of this is subjective, they are all good designs. Regards, Bruno -- ubuntu-art mailing list [email protected] https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
