Jacob:
Great job.
Correct the spelling : reckonize perhiphials -> recognize peripherals.
I am not a good speller either :-)
- balu

On 12/21/08, Jacob Torrey <[email protected]> wrote:
> Hello List Lurkers!
>
>     I have been asked to co-author a newspaper column in the Valley News
> comparing Linux and Windows using the following categories:
>
>     * Bang for your buck
>     * Learning Curve
>     * Compatibility
>     * Software Availability
>     * Help Availability
>     * Security
>
> I'm supposed to write a paragraph about each, and the other author will
> do the same, then I get a 1 sentence rebuttal to each of his paragraphs
> and vice versa. I'm asking for feedback on my rough draft paragraphs
> (attached). Any feedback would be great.
>
> Jacob
>

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