My thoughts on the draft:

Paragraph 1: "...since we have questions regarding the license..."
(not "problem")
Paragraph 4 after the readme.txt quote: "...has to be resolved..."
(missing space)
Question 6: extra "a" at end
Closing: add something to the effect of "I, along with a very active
Warzone 2100 community, await any response you are able to offer."

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