Will, It looks nice, but for me - and I may not be representative of your market - it has problems. Plenty of links and easy to understand.
For me it scrolls a little. But the thing that hits me strongly is the tiny type AND as it is in a rather subtle colour it is difficult to read.. You do allow the viewer to alter it so that is good, but now the scrolling is about half page. And now a word from your sub-editor(who has had to go and do other things. Hope this helps): home page: -----Who is Stewart and Company > this hits the singular/plural trap. >better 'Who we are' or 'About Stewart and Company' -----You name it, we have designed it. Our business graphic design expertise includes > first sentence is too colloquial and claims an awful lot, and the start to the second is very wordy. Why not something like 'Among our wide range of successful designs are...' -----The West Virginia Family Foundation is a active > 'an active' aboutsandc.php ------Stewart and Company is a Christian owned, professional design studio that specializes in > awkward and hits that singular/plural problem again. Why not something like 'Our emphasis is Christian and we specialize in...' ----We have never had an unsatisfied customer walk away with a poor design. > Not a good way of saying it! How about something like: 'We work till we achieve (or: 'Our aim is...') your complete satisfaction.' printdesign page: -----From little business cards to huge highway road signs, we have faced many scenarios and many print dimensions. >semi-colon or dash would be better than comma. ------However, we are more than happy to recommend a few companies that have stood out over the years as we have used them. > change to: We are more than happy to recommend companies that we have used successfully. -----Here is a short list of what we have designed in the past: >leave out 'in the past' (unless you have designed some in the future ;-)) ----Writing us in no way obligates you to use our services. It doesn't hurt to ask. > reverse sentences; add 'to' after 'writing' Joseph > Hello everyone, > > I would appreciate it if you would take the time to check out my new > site design: > > http://www.stewartandcompany.net > > I have put a lot of energy into making it as user-friendly as possible > with redundant links and putting things exactly where they "should be." > I welcome your comments. > > The text is 98% finished...I'm still tweaking it. If you english gurus > feel like correcting any part, please feel free. > > Fire away! > > Thanks so much, > > Will Stewart ____ � The WDVL Discussion List from WDVL.COM � ____ To Join wdvltalk, Send An Email To: mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Send Your Posts To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] To set a personal password send an email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with the words: "set WDVLTALK pw=yourpassword" in the body of the email. To change subscription settings to the wdvltalk digest version: http://wdvl.internet.com/WDVL/Forum/#sub ________________ http://www.wdvl.com _______________________ You are currently subscribed to wdvltalk as: [EMAIL PROTECTED] To unsubscribe send a blank email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] To unsubscribe via postal mail, please contact us at: Jupitermedia Corp. Attn: Discussion List Management 475 Park Avenue South New York, NY 10016 Please include the email address which you have been contacted with.
