Here are my comments on the Guidelines page. Some of these are
duplicates with other peoples' comments - but what the heck. ---> is
my suggestion
...Our choice of technologies is motivated but a belief in Rapid
Application Development(RAD)
--->by
...application. The occurrence of faled prototypes
----->failed
... A system analyst should be endowed with decision
----->systems --->granted
... It may compromise on aestetic issues and
--->aesthetic
... evelopment, but, it is not as an
-->remove comma
... executing the full project project.
------->remove repeated 'project'.
... we dare to say so and start again.
----> add 'or withdraw from the
project'?
... The business model behind FOSS is that
---> define FOSS
Use Open Standards and Interoprability
---->Interoperability
... by the Europen Union in its European Interoperability Framework:
---->add a link to the standard?
Use Industry Standard Tehcnologies
---->Technologies
... and it plays a singificantrole in the
--->significant role
... therefore less wise-spread. This gives us an hedge vs our
competitors.
--->widespread --->edge over our
competitors.
... Portability is crytical to maximize
--->critical
... We build software is portable and can un efficienly on most
computing Clouds.
--->add 'that' --->run
... optimization may be specific of each individual cloud
technologies
-->to
A more general point: There's no mention of Agile approaches - surely
we need to include that?
Question: Do you register an interest by using the 'Contact Us' page?
It's not clear, I'm afraid. I'm interested!
