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On Fri, Nov 12, 2010 at 11:06 AM, Paul Gerrard
<[email protected]>wrote:

> Here are my comments on the Guidelines page. Some of these are
> duplicates with other peoples' comments - but what the heck. ---> is
> my suggestion
>
>
> ...Our choice of technologies is motivated but a belief in Rapid
> Application Development(RAD)
>                                        --->by
>
> ...application. The occurrence of faled prototypes
>                               ----->failed
>
> ... A system analyst should be endowed with decision
>      ----->systems            --->granted
>
> ... It may compromise on aestetic issues and
>                         --->aesthetic
>
> ... evelopment, but, it is not as an
>                   -->remove comma
>
> ... executing the full project project.
>                              ------->remove repeated 'project'.
>
> ... we dare to say so and start again.
>                                  ----> add 'or withdraw from the
> project'?
>
> ... The business model behind FOSS is that
>                              ---> define FOSS
>
> Use Open Standards and Interoprability
>                       ---->Interoperability
>
> ... by the Europen Union in its European Interoperability Framework:
>        ---->add a link to the standard?
>
> Use Industry Standard Tehcnologies
>                      ---->Technologies
>
> ... and it plays a singificantrole in the
>                   --->significant role
>
> ... therefore less wise-spread. This gives us an hedge vs our
> competitors.
>                   --->widespread                --->edge over our
> competitors.
>
> ... Portability is crytical to maximize
>                   --->critical
>
> ... We build software is portable and can un efficienly on most
> computing Clouds.
>                     --->add 'that'       --->run
>
> ... optimization may be specific of each individual cloud
> technologies
>                                 -->to
>
> A more general point: There's no mention of Agile approaches - surely
> we need to include that?
>
> Question: Do you register an interest by using the 'Contact Us' page?
> It's not clear, I'm afraid. I'm interested!

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