Thank you for all the reported corrections. I think I have incorporated them all. Please check. Branko is already at work for a better layout.
Massimo On Nov 12, 4:06 am, Paul Gerrard <[email protected]> wrote: > Here are my comments on the Guidelines page. Some of these are > duplicates with other peoples' comments - but what the heck. ---> is > my suggestion > > ...Our choice of technologies is motivated but a belief in Rapid > Application Development(RAD) > --->by > > ...application. The occurrence of faled prototypes > ----->failed > > ... A system analyst should be endowed with decision > ----->systems --->granted > > ... It may compromise on aestetic issues and > --->aesthetic > > ... evelopment, but, it is not as an > -->remove comma > > ... executing the full project project. > ------->remove repeated 'project'. > > ... we dare to say so and start again. > ----> add 'or withdraw from the > project'? > > ... The business model behind FOSS is that > ---> define FOSS > > Use Open Standards and Interoprability > ---->Interoperability > > ... by the Europen Union in its European Interoperability Framework: > ---->add a link to the standard? > > Use Industry Standard Tehcnologies > ---->Technologies > > ... and it plays a singificantrole in the > --->significant role > > ... therefore less wise-spread. This gives us an hedge vs our > competitors. > --->widespread --->edge over our > competitors. > > ... Portability is crytical to maximize > --->critical > > ... We build software is portable and can un efficienly on most > computing Clouds. > --->add 'that' --->run > > ... optimization may be specific of each individual cloud > technologies > -->to > > A more general point: There's no mention of Agile approaches - surely > we need to include that? > > Question: Do you register an interest by using the 'Contact Us' page? > It's not clear, I'm afraid. I'm interested!
