I like what David said but to take it a step further I might change this from:
"WebObjects has you covered from a powerful component-based UI system to a best-of-breed Object-Relational Mapping (ORM) framework for database, file system and cloud object-persistence." to: "WebObjects has you covered: from a powerful component-based UI system to best-of-breed Object-Relational Mapping (ORM) framework for database, file system and cloud object-persistence." I think it just might read a little bit easier. Tim Worman UCLA GSE&IS On May 14, 2010, at 5:36 AM, David Avendasora wrote: > Hi Pascal > > Here's some revised wording for the "What is it?" section: > > "WebObjects is a proven, end-to-end Java solution for building high > performance, scalable Web applications and services. WebObjects has you > covered from a powerful component-based UI system to a best-of-breed > Object-Relational Mapping (ORM) framework for database, file system and cloud > object-persistence. > > WebObjects supports the latest technologies including AJAX and RESTful > webservices. It provides you with a consistent API following the best > object-oriented design principals that any Cocoa developer will find > instantly familiar with classes like NSArray and NSData and concepts like > Key-Value Coding. > > Think of it as Cocoa and CoreData meet Java." > > On May 14, 2010, at 7:52 AM, Pascal Robert wrote: > >> Hello everyone, >> >> I'm redoing the front page for wocommunity.org so that the news list is >> dynamic and I also added a « Featured » sliders where it fetch 5 >> organizations and projects randomly, and show them in rotation : >> >> https://wocommunity.org/page/default >> >> I'm thinking of moving the "Featured" part right after "What it is" so that >> we can display up to 10 news instead of 5. > > I think 5 is enough, even with the speed of the news lately! We don't want > there to be "news" thats months old. A link to more at the end should be > sufficient. > >> I would like opinions, good or bad, about the page. > > I like the page. It looks really nice, but the news should be sorted to > newest at the top. > > Dave _______________________________________________ > Do not post admin requests to the list. They will be ignored. > Webobjects-dev mailing list ([email protected]) > Help/Unsubscribe/Update your Subscription: > http://lists.apple.com/mailman/options/webobjects-dev/lists%40thetimmy.com > > This email sent to [email protected] _______________________________________________ Do not post admin requests to the list. They will be ignored. Webobjects-dev mailing list ([email protected]) Help/Unsubscribe/Update your Subscription: http://lists.apple.com/mailman/options/webobjects-dev/archive%40mail-archive.com This email sent to [email protected]
