On May 14, 2010, at 9:28 PM, Lachlan Deck wrote: > On 15/05/2010, at 4:25 AM, Tim Worman wrote: > >> I like what David said but to take it a step further I might change this >> from: >> >> "WebObjects has you covered from a powerful component-based UI system to a >> best-of-breed Object-Relational Mapping (ORM) framework for database, file >> system and cloud object-persistence." >> >> to: >> >> "WebObjects has you covered: from a powerful component-based UI system to >> best-of-breed Object-Relational Mapping (ORM) framework for database, file >> system and cloud object-persistence." >> >> I think it just might read a little bit easier. > > I'd take out the 'has you covered', which sounds a little gimmicky, and > replace it with WebObjects provides full coverage for...
The former is definitely more casual. Tim >> Tim Worman >> UCLA GSE&IS >> >> >> >> On May 14, 2010, at 5:36 AM, David Avendasora wrote: >> >>> Hi Pascal >>> >>> Here's some revised wording for the "What is it?" section: >>> >>> "WebObjects is a proven, end-to-end Java solution for building high >>> performance, scalable Web applications and services. WebObjects has you >>> covered from a powerful component-based UI system to a best-of-breed >>> Object-Relational Mapping (ORM) framework for database, file system and >>> cloud object-persistence. >>> >>> WebObjects supports the latest technologies including AJAX and RESTful >>> webservices. It provides you with a consistent API following the best >>> object-oriented design principals that any Cocoa developer will find >>> instantly familiar with classes like NSArray and NSData and concepts like >>> Key-Value Coding. >>> >>> Think of it as Cocoa and CoreData meet Java." >>> >>> On May 14, 2010, at 7:52 AM, Pascal Robert wrote: >>> >>>> Hello everyone, >>>> >>>> I'm redoing the front page for wocommunity.org so that the news list is >>>> dynamic and I also added a « Featured » sliders where it fetch 5 >>>> organizations and projects randomly, and show them in rotation : >>>> >>>> https://wocommunity.org/page/default >>>> >>>> I'm thinking of moving the "Featured" part right after "What it is" so >>>> that we can display up to 10 news instead of 5. >>> >>> I think 5 is enough, even with the speed of the news lately! We don't want >>> there to be "news" thats months old. A link to more at the end should be >>> sufficient. >>> >>>> I would like opinions, good or bad, about the page. >>> >>> I like the page. It looks really nice, but the news should be sorted to >>> newest at the top. >>> >>> Dave _______________________________________________ >>> Do not post admin requests to the list. They will be ignored. >>> Webobjects-dev mailing list ([email protected]) >>> Help/Unsubscribe/Update your Subscription: >>> http://lists.apple.com/mailman/options/webobjects-dev/lists%40thetimmy.com >>> >>> This email sent to [email protected] >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Do not post admin requests to the list. They will be ignored. >> Webobjects-dev mailing list ([email protected]) >> Help/Unsubscribe/Update your Subscription: >> http://lists.apple.com/mailman/options/webobjects-dev/lachlan.deck%40gmail.com >> >> This email sent to [email protected] > > with regards, > -- > > Lachlan Deck > > > _______________________________________________ Do not post admin requests to the list. They will be ignored. Webobjects-dev mailing list ([email protected]) Help/Unsubscribe/Update your Subscription: http://lists.apple.com/mailman/options/webobjects-dev/archive%40mail-archive.com This email sent to [email protected]
