On 15/05/2010, at 4:25 AM, Tim Worman wrote: > I like what David said but to take it a step further I might change this from: > > "WebObjects has you covered from a powerful component-based UI system to a > best-of-breed Object-Relational Mapping (ORM) framework for database, file > system and cloud object-persistence." > > to: > > "WebObjects has you covered: from a powerful component-based UI system to > best-of-breed Object-Relational Mapping (ORM) framework for database, file > system and cloud object-persistence." > > I think it just might read a little bit easier.
I'd take out the 'has you covered', which sounds a little gimmicky, and replace it with WebObjects provides full coverage for... > > Tim Worman > UCLA GSE&IS > > > > On May 14, 2010, at 5:36 AM, David Avendasora wrote: > >> Hi Pascal >> >> Here's some revised wording for the "What is it?" section: >> >> "WebObjects is a proven, end-to-end Java solution for building high >> performance, scalable Web applications and services. WebObjects has you >> covered from a powerful component-based UI system to a best-of-breed >> Object-Relational Mapping (ORM) framework for database, file system and >> cloud object-persistence. >> >> WebObjects supports the latest technologies including AJAX and RESTful >> webservices. It provides you with a consistent API following the best >> object-oriented design principals that any Cocoa developer will find >> instantly familiar with classes like NSArray and NSData and concepts like >> Key-Value Coding. >> >> Think of it as Cocoa and CoreData meet Java." >> >> On May 14, 2010, at 7:52 AM, Pascal Robert wrote: >> >>> Hello everyone, >>> >>> I'm redoing the front page for wocommunity.org so that the news list is >>> dynamic and I also added a « Featured » sliders where it fetch 5 >>> organizations and projects randomly, and show them in rotation : >>> >>> https://wocommunity.org/page/default >>> >>> I'm thinking of moving the "Featured" part right after "What it is" so that >>> we can display up to 10 news instead of 5. >> >> I think 5 is enough, even with the speed of the news lately! We don't want >> there to be "news" thats months old. A link to more at the end should be >> sufficient. >> >>> I would like opinions, good or bad, about the page. >> >> I like the page. It looks really nice, but the news should be sorted to >> newest at the top. >> >> Dave _______________________________________________ >> Do not post admin requests to the list. They will be ignored. >> Webobjects-dev mailing list ([email protected]) >> Help/Unsubscribe/Update your Subscription: >> http://lists.apple.com/mailman/options/webobjects-dev/lists%40thetimmy.com >> >> This email sent to [email protected] > > _______________________________________________ > Do not post admin requests to the list. They will be ignored. > Webobjects-dev mailing list ([email protected]) > Help/Unsubscribe/Update your Subscription: > http://lists.apple.com/mailman/options/webobjects-dev/lachlan.deck%40gmail.com > > This email sent to [email protected] with regards, -- Lachlan Deck _______________________________________________ Do not post admin requests to the list. They will be ignored. Webobjects-dev mailing list ([email protected]) Help/Unsubscribe/Update your Subscription: http://lists.apple.com/mailman/options/webobjects-dev/archive%40mail-archive.com This email sent to [email protected]
