On Sun, 2011-06-19 at 16:53 +0200, Italo Vignoli wrote: > On 6/19/11 4:38 PM, drew wrote: > > > With a 'link to' as proposed by Andrea and a minor edit by me, are there > > any further editing suggestions? > > I am fine with the text.
Well, you were totally correct, IMO, on catching the word permissive as being a problem BTW. Reading it I can't help but feel it's a bit wordy here and there. Looking at the way I worded 'adding and removing' in the second paragraph seems a bit awkward. Anyway - Andreas request was for a first draft and as that, a first draft, I think this is pretty good - not to mention others likely will come along (or back) and make it better. So let's call it good and hit the golf course, huh? :-) //drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/website/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
