Le 2011-06-19 11:43, drew a écrit :
On Sun, 2011-06-19 at 16:53 +0200, Italo Vignoli wrote:
On 6/19/11 4:38 PM, drew wrote:
With a 'link to' as proposed by Andrea and a minor edit by me, are there any
further editing suggestions?
I am fine with the text.
Well, you were totally correct, IMO, on catching the word permissive as
being a problem BTW.
Reading it I can't help but feel it's a bit wordy here and there.
Looking at the way I worded 'adding and removing' in the second
paragraph seems a bit awkward.
Anyway - Andreas request was for a first draft and as that, a first
draft, I think this is pretty good - not to mention others likely will
come along (or back) and make it better.
So let's call it good and hit the golf course, huh? :-)
//drew
Thanks everyone. Looks good to me also. The licensing issue in the text
seems right also.
Let us know once its on the site and we'll take another quick look at it.
Cheers
Marc
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