On 17/01/12 15:01, Daniel Barrett wrote: >> http://test.wikipedia.org/?banner=blackout > > As a writer, I believe the current message ("The Wikipedia community has > authorized...") is long and wordy and therefore not likely to be read by most > users. I recommend shortening& simplifying it. Here's an example that > removes 30+ words and preserves the meaning: > > WE NEED YOU TO PROTECT FREE SPEECH ONLINE > The English Wikipedia is "blacked out" for 24 hours to protest two bills > before the United States Congress, known as SOPA and PIPA. These bills > endanger free speech in the United States and abroad, setting a frightening > precedent of Internet censorship for the world. > > Today we ask you to take action. > [[Take action]] [[Learn more]]
+1 The first sentence is really too complicated. Markus _______________________________________________ Wikitech-l mailing list [email protected] https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/wikitech-l
