On Tue, Sep 4, 2012 at 1:13 PM, Tim Moses <[email protected]> wrote:
> Please take a moment to look it over and comment.  I need your help to
> correct and complete it.

I'm afraid that, while I lovely use of ASCII-art, I find the document
very hard to understand. If I didn't already know what it was trying
to say, I don't believe that I'd have a hope of understanding it. I
feel that having two different labels in each box is a mistake, as are
the carnality indicators, at least as currently drawn. Some examples
may also help.


Cheers

AGL
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