> Colleagues - Here's a 00 I-D on trust models.
>
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-moses-webpki-trustmodel-00
>
> Please take a moment to look it over and comment.  I need your help to
> correct and complete it.


It appears to be a good start, thanks for writing it up.

An overall +1 to AGL's comments. I think some definitions of terms would also help, such as at least these..

  Unaffiliated user

  Certificate User

  Policy Management Authority

  certificate-holder certificate

..though all the terms for "functions of the Web PKI" should probably be at
least briefly defined.

Also, are figures 5 and 6 inter-related?  on it's own I don't understand fig 5,
and it almost seems fig 6 continues fig 5.

In general, perhaps it'd help to describe in (much) more detailed prose what fig 1 is attempting to represent. eg, I don't understand the overlapping boxes, and don't know if you're referring to them in the last paragraph of section 1, or referring to the "stacked" boxes of the underlying large box.


HTH,

=JeffH

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