Thanks Adam.  If the figures aren't adding anything, we might as well just 
delete them.  All the best.  Tim.



On 2012-09-04, at 4:33 PM, "Adam Langley" <[email protected]> wrote:

> On Tue, Sep 4, 2012 at 1:13 PM, Tim Moses <[email protected]> wrote:
>> Please take a moment to look it over and comment.  I need your help to
>> correct and complete it.
> 
> I'm afraid that, while I lovely use of ASCII-art, I find the document
> very hard to understand. If I didn't already know what it was trying
> to say, I don't believe that I'd have a hope of understanding it. I
> feel that having two different labels in each box is a mistake, as are
> the carnality indicators, at least as currently drawn. Some examples
> may also help.
> 
> 
> Cheers
> 
> AGL
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