Had I not known
that I was dead
already
I would have mourned
my loss of life

Ota Dokan (1432-86) military scholar and poet

Some of these tanka poems are pretty good. This is not one of them. In all
fairness to Ota Dokan, he was stabbed as he was bathing and reportedly
uttered the poem as he died. What a way to go.

So if anyone wants to submit their own tanka poem (not necessarily a death
poem), take comfort in the fact that even the best poets had their off days.
I for one would not be able to do better than even the worst, but here is my
try (think of your favorite Elvis Presley song):

Here I sit
broken hearted
because
I came to shit
but only farted

:(



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