hi,,,,,,,
i thot i ll post the shortest poem i ever wrote too...
i shall look forward to some critique too....
Untitled
Really thr wasnt much tht was common between us......
u said u loved me .... i never did
and i ... i loved you... u never did....
Prerna
--- Lillian D'Costa <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> Hi all,
> below is a tiny poem I wrote the other day.
> I think the smallest I've ever written,
> Would love your feedback, how else do I learn.
>
> regards
> Lillian
>
> ---------------------------------------
>
> I know not, what made you,
> when,
> or how.
>
> All I know, is I feel the sting,
> here,
> even now.
>
>
> -Lillian D'Costa-
> 3rd October 05
>
>
>
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