[ZESTPoets] Re: word rosary*: perceptions

Fri, 25 Nov 2005 08:49:06 -0800

Vivek:

"…I like the idea of riffing off words into a "word rosary" (wasn't sure which word started it all, though)."

this http://www.chowk.com/show_article.cgi?aid=00003025&channel=leafyglade%20inn&start=0&end=9&chapter=1&page=1>... and the poem world whirlpool started the `word-rosary' series…

…i will mull over riedel… wanted to convey a lot more than would have come through with basket and wine  or basket and glasses… to elaborate on what i wrote Siva earlier…even though riedel is `understood' amidst my friends here i was aware it may not be easily understood by everyone...hence the link

" Perhaps there is some possibility to hypertext poetry after all."

…yes, in this cyber medium it can add another dimension

thank you for your feedback

rgds

t



--- In [email protected], temporal t <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>
> Siva:
>
> no need to apologize…as a newbie what i have reckoned here is that this is
> the place to gather reactions to works in progress… and it is in this spirit
> i submitted this poem…am still getting my feet wet here…
>
> …in a way i have cocooned myself away for quite some time…so 'returning' is
> a ginger process…and this has become a bit more interesting when a friend
> suggested this site…have been lurking here for a few weeks…as a current
> dweller of the frozen north…removed from the hustle bustle of the motherland
> since many decades with a double jeopardy (from the wrong side of the
> divide)…and as one not familiar with quite a few words and phrases used here
> almost casually…e.g. …Yama, satsang, shantam…(my shortcoming – not blaming
> the poets)…i decided to provide a footnote or a link… do this all the time
> when i use urdu/hindi words in english poems … and provide foot notes for
> readers not familiar with them…
>
> Vivek:
> thanks…shall respond to your comments shortly
>
> rgds
>
> t
>
>
> On 11/25/05, siva_ramanathan04 [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
> >
> > Sehra Nawad
> > I apologise for my hasty and prejudiced outburts.More than feeling
> > ashamed of what I thought and wrote,I take this as an opportunity for
> > reading Vivek's analysis and comments.
> > And thanks Vivek.I do not know how I did not connect up these words
> > and I was lazy to refer a dictionary.
> > T.K.D.used to tell me[T.K.Doraiswamy ,[alias Nakulan]to read and
> > re-read before forming an opinion.
> > Sivakami Velliangiri
> >
> >
> > --- In [email protected], "Desert Dweller/Sehra Navard"
> > [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
> > >
> > > word rosary*: perceptions
> > >
> > > idle summer afternoon
> > > basket and riedel* beside
> > > we lie by the winding brook
> > > hear water flutter
> > > blades rustle in breeze
> > > birds chirp behind the trees
> > > oblivious we interpret cumulonimbus*
> > > and whisper to each other
> > > what we read in their form
> > > i see a child -- she a woman
> > > sad survivor -- hut afire
> > > man betrayed -- woman abused
> > > our differing perceptions and
> > > the same cumulonimbus*
> > >
> > > word rosary is a series of poems on word impact that i have be
> > writing.. this is one of them.
> > >
> > > cumulonimbus
> > >
> > > riedel
> > >
> >
> >
> >
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