Hi!

> John has suggested some changes in the CFP, would anybody else please
> take a look at the text before I send out spelling mistakes to thousands
> of readers? I would feel a little bit embarrassed if that happens.
> The current text is:
> 
> Subject:
> [ANN] EuroPython 2009 – Call for Participation!
> 
> Body Text:
> On behalf of the EuroPython 2009 organisation it is my privilege and
> honour to announce the 'Call for Participation' for EuroPython 2009! The
> European conference for the communities around Python, including the
> Zope and Plone communities.

Seems to me that this is not a complete sentence. Maybe it should be :-)
or was this supposed to be a continuation of the sentences in front?

> This years conference will be held in Birmingham, UK from Monday 20th 
> June to Saturday 4th July 2009.
> 
> Talk & Themes
> Do you have something you wish to present at EuroPython? Go to
> http://www.europython.eu/talks/cfp/  for this years themes and
> submissions criteria, the deadline is on 5th April 2009.

Is it "year's" ?

> Other Talks, Activities and Events
> Have you got something which does not fit the above? Visit
> http://www.europython.eu/talks/ .
> 
> Help Us Out
> We could use a hand any contribution is welcome, please take a look at
> http://www.europython.eu/contact/ .
> 
> Sponsors
> An unique opportunity to affiliate with the prestigious EuroPython
> conference!
> http://www.europython.eu/sponsors/ .
> 
> Spread the Word
> Improve our publicity by distributing this announcement in your corner
> of the community, please coordinate this with the organizers:
> http://www.europython.eu/contact/
> 
> General Information
> For more information about the conference, please visit
> http://www.europython.eu/
> 
> Looking forward to see you!
> 
> The EuroPython Team
> 

So much from a german guy, let's let the native speakers have a look :)

You could maybe also mention the blog at
http://europython.wordpress.com/ (maybe we can create a redirect from
blog.europython.eu?) or ask folks to follow us on Twitter at
http://twitter.com/europython

(might be under "spread the word").


cheers,

Christian


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