Thanks Toshi. I'll try to get these changes incorporated before the weekend release.
-Stuart On Tue, Feb 12, 2013 at 3:56 PM, YOSHIMATSU Toshihide <qzt04...@nifty.ne.jp> wrote: > Hi Martin and Stuart, > > I checked incorrect or dead links in the current version of Manual > (except Appendix). > > Following are the results and my suggestions. > > * 3.3 Installing documentation > > http://www.adobe.com/products/acrobat/ > --> Alive, but incorrect. Please change to http://get.adobe.com/reader/ > Also it would be better to correct the description: > Adobe's Acrobat Reader, available from > --> Adobe Reader, available from > > * 8.10 The autopilot > > https://www3.bendixking.com/servlet/com.honeywell.aes.utility.PDFDownLoadServlet?FileName=/TechPubs/repository/006-18034-0000_2.pdf > --> Connection has timed out. Please delete this link. > > * 8.13.1 How to land the Cherokee Warrior II > > http://www.alioth.net/flying/pa28-161/index.html > --> Connection has timed out. Please delete this link. > > * 10.5 Epilogue > > http://worldaerodata.com > --> Very unfortunately, server not found. Please delete this link. > cf. http://www.flightgear.org/forums/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=19067 > > http://www.faa.gov/library/manuals/aviation/instrument_flying_handbook > --> http://www.faa.gov/library/manuals/aviation/media/FAA-H-8083-15B.pdf > or > http://www.faa.gov/library/manuals/aviation/ > Also it would be better to correct the description: > It can be downloaded as multiple PDF files. > --> It can be downloaded as a PDF file. > > > Moreover, I noticed that "Part IV Appendices" includes no sections, and > "Part V Annexes" includes Appendix A (Missed approach) and B (Landing). > > In the commit log of getstart.tex: > http://mapserver.flightgear.org/git/gitweb.pl?p=getstart;a=commitdiff;h=799005980b3825dfc731e1528473630b9cd906d5 > > iflanguage{english}{ > part{Annexes} > {} > > might should be > > iflanguage{french}{ > part{Annexes} > {} > > but I'm not sure if Annexes is French word... > > Cheers, > Toshi > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ > Free Next-Gen Firewall Hardware Offer > Buy your Sophos next-gen firewall before the end March 2013 > and get the hardware for free! Learn more. > http://p.sf.net/sfu/sophos-d2d-feb > _______________________________________________ > Flightgear-devel mailing list > Flightgear-devel@lists.sourceforge.net > https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/flightgear-devel ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Free Next-Gen Firewall Hardware Offer Buy your Sophos next-gen firewall before the end March 2013 and get the hardware for free! Learn more. http://p.sf.net/sfu/sophos-d2d-feb _______________________________________________ Flightgear-devel mailing list Flightgear-devel@lists.sourceforge.net https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/flightgear-devel
