Dear all, Thanks to the authors of the draft, and to everyone who has contributed with feedback.
As the shepherd of draft-ietf-6lo-updating-rfc-8928, please find below my comments on revision -01: - Abstract: s/by updating the bit position for the C-flag and registering it with IANA/by updating the bit position for the C-flag in the Extended Address Registration Option (EARO) and registering it with IANA - Section 1, first paragraph: please provide some very brief explanation of what is the C-flag or a forward reference to its description in Section 3. - Section 2.3: s/Low-Rate Personal Area Network/Low-Rate Wireless Personal Area Network - Section 3: "Moreover, figure 1 of this I-D replaces Figure 1 in [RFC8928]". I understand that this sentence applies only when the EARO is carried in an NS message (as it includes the F and Prefix Length fields instead of the Status field). Note that Figure 1 in RFC 8928 is intended for both NS and NA messages. Perhaps the mentioned sentence may be updated. Alternatively, a second figure could be added, showing the format for EARO in NA messages with the correct C-flag position. - Figure 1: there are two different bits called 'R'. Please consider renaming the reserved bit with a letter other than 'R'. - Section 3: s/T: 1-bit flg/T: 1-bit flag - Section 3, 'TID and Registration Lifetime': s/It's incremented/It is incremented - Section 5.1: s/refernce/reference - Section 5.1, Table 1: s/RFC 8928/RFC This and RFC 8928 Cheers, Carles On Tue, 29 Apr 2025 at 16:38, Shwetha <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi All, > > This email initiates a Working Group Last Call (WGLC) for > draft-ietf-6lo-updating-rfc-8928-01 [1]. The Last Call will run for 2 > weeks, ending on Wednesday, May 14, 2025. > > This document updates RFC 8928 [2], “Address-Protected Neighbor Discovery > for Low-Power and Lossy Networks” (AP-ND), by updating the bit > position for the C-flag and registering it with IANA. > The authors have addressed the initial set of comments received since the > draft was adopted. > > Please send your comments, feedback, and reviews to the mailing list > before the end of the Last Call. > > Thank you! > Carles and Shwetha > > [1] > https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-6lo-updating-rfc-8928-01.txt > [2] https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8928.txt >
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