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Unsure whether sections 2.2 and 2.3 are useful here, this I-D is a simple fix in the existing RFC (i.e., section 3 is the core). In section 3, I do not think that the reference to [I-D.ietf-6lo-prefix-registration<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-6lo-prefix-registration-10>] is useful or required. Also in section 3, s/Prefix Length/PrefixLength/ when describing the fields. More important, I think that this field should simply be “Status” as in RFC 8928 as this I-D updates RFC 8928. Minor nit, but for Adnan, the header shows his affiliation as “P Bari”, which is rather meaningless, use “Politecnico di Bari” ? Hope this helps -éric From: Shwetha <[email protected]> Date: Tuesday, 29 April 2025 at 15:38 To: [email protected] <[email protected]> Cc: Carles Gomez Montenegro <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]> Subject: [6lo] WGLC for draft-ietf-6lo-updating-rfc-8928-01 Hi All, This email initiates a Working Group Last Call (WGLC) for draft-ietf-6lo-updating-rfc-8928-01 [1]. The Last Call will run for 2 weeks, ending on Wednesday, May 14, 2025. This document updates RFC 8928 [2], “Address-Protected Neighbor Discovery for Low-Power and Lossy Networks” (AP-ND), by updating the bit position for the C-flag and registering it with IANA. The authors have addressed the initial set of comments received since the draft was adopted. Please send your comments, feedback, and reviews to the mailing list before the end of the Last Call. Thank you! Carles and Shwetha [1] https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-6lo-updating-rfc-8928-01.txt [2] https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8928.txt
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