Dear Adnan, Thanks for your response.
Please find below my inline comments: On Mon, 12 May 2025 at 15:38, Adnan Rashid <[email protected]> wrote: > Dear Carles, > > Thanks for the review. We will update the draft soon. > > I have two questions > > - Figure 1: there are two different bits called 'R'. Please consider > renaming the reserved bit with a letter other than 'R'. > > We used the small letter "r". Please let me know if the IETF/WG is ok with > this. if not then suggest any other. > > Do you mean you are considering to use "r" in the update you are preparing, and for the "reserved" bit? Well, "r" is better than the previous "R", but I am unsure if it is sufficiently different. Once I used "V" (from "reserVed"), but we are entering some subjective realm here. > As we update RFC 8928, should we explicitly notify readers about the > previously incorrect caption name 'Enhanced Address Registration Option' > and clarify that the correct term is 'Extended Address Registration Option > (EARO)'? If yes then we will update it in Section 3. > > I don't think so. The term is actually the same either way, and once the acronym EARO has been defined in the main text, then I understand it is not strictly necessary to define it again in a figure caption. Nevertheless, the RFC Editor will eventually address this if necessary (e.g., if there are special rules for acronyms in figure captions I am not aware of). Cheers, Carles > On Tue, 29 Apr 2025 at 16:38, Shwetha <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi All, > > This email initiates a Working Group Last Call (WGLC) for > draft-ietf-6lo-updating-rfc-8928-01 [1]. The Last Call will run for 2 > weeks, ending on Wednesday, May 14, 2025. > > This document updates RFC 8928 [2], “Address-Protected Neighbor Discovery > for Low-Power and Lossy Networks” (AP-ND), by updating the bit > position for the C-flag and registering it with IANA. > The authors have addressed the initial set of comments received since the > draft was adopted. > > Please send your comments, feedback, and reviews to the mailing list > before the end of the Last Call. > > Thank you! > Carles and Shwetha > > [1] > https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-6lo-updating-rfc-8928-01.txt > [2] https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8928.txt > > Informativa Privacy - Ai sensi del Regolamento (UE) 2016/679 si precisa > che le informazioni contenute in questo messaggio sono riservate e ad uso > esclusivo del destinatario. Qualora il messaggio in parola Le fosse > pervenuto per errore, La preghiamo di eliminarlo senza copiarlo e di non > inoltrarlo a terzi, dandocene gentilmente comunicazione. Grazie. Privacy > Information - This message, for the Regulation (UE) 2016/679, may contain > confidential and/or privileged information. If you are not the addressee or > authorized to receive this for the addressee, you must not use, copy, > disclose or take any action based on this message or any information > herein. If you have received this message in error, please advise the > sender immediately by reply e-mail and delete this message. Thank you for > your cooperation. >
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