>>>>> "Yoshihiro" == Yoshihiro Ohba <[email protected]> writes:

    Yoshihiro> Sam, The provided text looks good, except that the text
    Yoshihiro> is generally applicable to any EAP lower-layer inclucing
    Yoshihiro> applications.  Said that my suggestion is to replace
    Yoshihiro> "application" with "lower-layer".

I'm really pleased when I hear that you're happy with this direction. I
 tried hard  to capture the points you made and I'm glad
 we're quite  close.

I actually think this advice is rather application specific.
I'd say the same thing for a network access lower layer but my emphasis
would be different.
Also, I think giving general lower layer advice in this document is
inappropriate.

For those reasons, I'd be happier if we did not make that substitution.
I support all of Jim's proposed edits.
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