Sam and all, (2012/11/16 7:15), Sam Hartman wrote:
"Yoshihiro" == Yoshihiro Ohba <[email protected]> writes:Yoshihiro> Sam, The provided text looks good, except that the text Yoshihiro> is generally applicable to any EAP lower-layer inclucing Yoshihiro> applications. Said that my suggestion is to replace Yoshihiro> "application" with "lower-layer".I'm really pleased when I hear that you're happy with this direction. I tried hard to capture the points you made and I'm glad we're quite close. I actually think this advice is rather application specific.
Why do you think so?
I'd say the same thing for a network access lower layer but my emphasis would be different. Also, I think giving general lower layer advice in this document is inappropriate.
I can understand this is a scope issue, but general readers of this document would view the text in the same way as I did, because I believe it is a technical fact regardless of the scope of the document. I would like to hear from you and others whether my point is valid, and if my point is valid what the best way to capture my point would be.
Regards, Yoshihiro Ohba
For those reasons, I'd be happier if we did not make that substitution. I support all of Jim's proposed edits.
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