Some small edits that you might want to consider.

Jim


> -----Original Message-----
> From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf
> Of Sam Hartman
> Sent: Wednesday, November 14, 2012 11:37 AM
> To: [email protected]
> Subject: [abfab] Retransmission Text for EAP applicability
> 
> 
> In EAP, the authenticator is responsible for retransmission. By default
EAP
> assumes that the lower layer (the application in this context) is
unreliable.
s/lower layer/lower layer transport/
> The authenticator can send a packet whenever its retransmission timer
s/The authenticator can send/To deal with this, the authenticator resends/
> triggers. In this mode, applications need to process EAP messages at any
time
s/need to process/need to be able to receive and process/
> during the authentication conversation.
> 
> Alternatively, EAP permits a lower layer to set the retransmission timer
to
> infinite. In this case, the lower layer is responsible for reliable
delivery of EAP
s/In this case/When this happens/
s/layer is/layer becomes/
> messages. Applications that use a lock-step or client-driven
authentication
> protocol might benefit from this approach.
> 
> In addition to retransmission behavior applications need to deal with
> discarded EAP messages. Whenever some EAP methods receive  erroneous
> input, these methods discard the input rather than generating an error
> response. If the erroneous input was generated by an attacker, legitimate
> input can sometimes be received after the erroneous input. Applications
> MUST handle an EAP method discarding a message, although the specific
> way in which discarded messages will be handled depend on the
> characteristics of the application. Options include failing the
authentication at
> the application level and waiting for additional EAP input, possibly after
an
s/level/level, requesting an EAP retransmit/
> EAP retransmit.
> 
> Specifications of how EAP is used for application authentication SHOULD
> document how retransmission and message discards are handled.
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