You might just add a caption on the opening scene that read's "Your Internet should be:"

Change "Building Specific" to "...and available in your building."

and leave the rest as is.

To your Success,
Dave

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On 1/18/2016 9:04 AM, Josh Reynolds wrote:
It looks like random stock video clips put together with words /
phrases over the top of it.

It didn't grab my attention at all (and I wouldn't have watched the
rest of it if I hadn't forced myself to). It also didn't tell me
anything about what the company does, the services offered, or why I
should go with this company vs the competition.

I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just saying - from a consumer
standpoint, I have no idea what this is at all.

On Mon, Jan 18, 2016 at 10:57 AM, Gino Villarini <[email protected]> wrote:
please

On Mon, Jan 18, 2016 at 12:47 PM, Josh Reynolds <[email protected]>
wrote:
Can we be honest? :)

On Mon, Jan 18, 2016 at 8:55 AM, Gino Villarini <[email protected]>
wrote:
guys, please check the video we made for intro of our MDU project:

https://youtu.be/9iXZjmYJZj0

Feedback always appreciated!



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