I don't want to discourage you from creating a video, I'm just saying
I know you can do better :) It's too abstract. Look to the AT&T video
for examples / ideas - I'm sure they spent millions on it. Youtube
probably has other good examples as well.

Good luck!

On Mon, Jan 18, 2016 at 11:19 AM, Gino Villarini <[email protected]> wrote:
> All great feedback! thanks!!!
>
> On Mon, Jan 18, 2016 at 1:14 PM, Dave Thomas <[email protected]> wrote:
>>
>> You might just add a caption on the opening scene that read's "Your
>> Internet should be:"
>>
>> Change "Building Specific" to "...and available in your building."
>>
>> and leave the rest as is.
>>
>> To your Success,
>> Dave
>>
>> Dave Thomas - Director of Client Relations, Visp,net | WISP Billing and
>> Automation | 301 NE 6th Street, Grants Pass, OR 97526 Direct 541-955-6905 /
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>> On 1/18/2016 9:04 AM, Josh Reynolds wrote:
>>>
>>> It looks like random stock video clips put together with words /
>>> phrases over the top of it.
>>>
>>> It didn't grab my attention at all (and I wouldn't have watched the
>>> rest of it if I hadn't forced myself to). It also didn't tell me
>>> anything about what the company does, the services offered, or why I
>>> should go with this company vs the competition.
>>>
>>> I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just saying - from a consumer
>>> standpoint, I have no idea what this is at all.
>>>
>>> On Mon, Jan 18, 2016 at 10:57 AM, Gino Villarini <[email protected]>
>>> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> please
>>>>
>>>> On Mon, Jan 18, 2016 at 12:47 PM, Josh Reynolds <[email protected]>
>>>> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>> Can we be honest? :)
>>>>>
>>>>> On Mon, Jan 18, 2016 at 8:55 AM, Gino Villarini <[email protected]>
>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> guys, please check the video we made for intro of our MDU project:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> https://youtu.be/9iXZjmYJZj0
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Feedback always appreciated!
>>>>>>
>>>>
>>
>

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