Josh, no way discouraged.. it is what it is... stock video and fonts!
lol... feedback is truly appreciated!

On Mon, Jan 18, 2016 at 1:20 PM, Josh Reynolds <[email protected]> wrote:

> I don't want to discourage you from creating a video, I'm just saying
> I know you can do better :) It's too abstract. Look to the AT&T video
> for examples / ideas - I'm sure they spent millions on it. Youtube
> probably has other good examples as well.
>
> Good luck!
>
> On Mon, Jan 18, 2016 at 11:19 AM, Gino Villarini <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> > All great feedback! thanks!!!
> >
> > On Mon, Jan 18, 2016 at 1:14 PM, Dave Thomas <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>
> >> You might just add a caption on the opening scene that read's "Your
> >> Internet should be:"
> >>
> >> Change "Building Specific" to "...and available in your building."
> >>
> >> and leave the rest as is.
> >>
> >> To your Success,
> >> Dave
> >>
> >> Dave Thomas - Director of Client Relations, Visp,net | WISP Billing and
> >> Automation | 301 NE 6th Street, Grants Pass, OR 97526 Direct
> 541-955-6905 /
> >> Skype: dave.thomasvisp | Office: 541-955-6900 | cell: 541-219-7880
> >> On 1/18/2016 9:04 AM, Josh Reynolds wrote:
> >>>
> >>> It looks like random stock video clips put together with words /
> >>> phrases over the top of it.
> >>>
> >>> It didn't grab my attention at all (and I wouldn't have watched the
> >>> rest of it if I hadn't forced myself to). It also didn't tell me
> >>> anything about what the company does, the services offered, or why I
> >>> should go with this company vs the competition.
> >>>
> >>> I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just saying - from a consumer
> >>> standpoint, I have no idea what this is at all.
> >>>
> >>> On Mon, Jan 18, 2016 at 10:57 AM, Gino Villarini <[email protected]>
> >>> wrote:
> >>>>
> >>>> please
> >>>>
> >>>> On Mon, Jan 18, 2016 at 12:47 PM, Josh Reynolds <[email protected]
> >
> >>>> wrote:
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Can we be honest? :)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> On Mon, Jan 18, 2016 at 8:55 AM, Gino Villarini <[email protected]
> >
> >>>>> wrote:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> guys, please check the video we made for intro of our MDU project:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> https://youtu.be/9iXZjmYJZj0
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Feedback always appreciated!
> >>>>>>
> >>>>
> >>
> >
>

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