21.07.2011 8:20, Simon Wilkinson wrote
On 21 Jul 2011, at 06:00, Mykyta Yevstifeyev<[email protected]>  wrote:

Reading this draft, I don't actually understand why you chose to publish it as 
RFC.
We're using the Independent Submissions stream for afs3 documents. See RFC4846 
for details of this stream, and it's purpose.
I've read RFC 4846 and have noticed you're using Independent Submissions stream. Probably, the draft should be clearer regarding relationships with currently deployed Internet protocols/technologies, since your document "at the first glance" seems to be a bit irrelevant for the RFC series. The counter conclusion may only be made by people who are involved in the AFS development and other contiguous technologies (whom I don't belong to), which makes the document not as readable as desired. A good background placed in the Introduction is a good way to resolve the issue.

Mykyta
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