On 5/31/14, 2:55 PM, David Farmer wrote:

Therefore, putting all the suggesting together, here is text for the
Editorial Change I'm proposing at the PPC next week.

     If an organization requires more resource resources than stipulated
by the
     applicable minimum allocation sizes size in force at the time of
their request,
     their experimental documentation should have request must clearly
described
     describe and justified justify why this a larger allocation is
required.

An organization is a singular entity without gender. Pronoun should match. ("its", not "their"). Also, while the request for the documentation isn't experimental, the allocation is. Thus:

     If an organization requires more resources than stipulated
     by the applicable minimum allocation size in force at the
     time of its request, the request must clearly describe and
     justify why a larger allocation is required.



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